The lighter scene is where the actors names are shown |
Our full timeline lasts 2:05:11 in total |
UPDATE 7th February:
We have shown Ms Moore (one of our media teachers) the OTS as far as we have got it. She had a few positive things to say about the video but also had some constructive criticism. She said it was not obvious enough who was who in the scenes and we needed to contrast it more. She also said that the lighting in the Jekyll scenes varied too much and it looked strange. There were also parts of silence in the voiceover that she picked up on and said that she thought they were there either on purpose or there was nothing to say. We realized that we could make the silence a lot shorter and we are now in the process of doing so. Another thing she said was the titles were an anticlimax and said it was a let down after the title 'Hide' and the lighter scene itself just to have plain titles in the corner but we explained they were only temporary, we showed her the idea Matthew recorded and she said that it looked a lot more creative. The credits Matthew filmed are found here:
http://asmediastudiesmatthewevans.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/creating-credits.html
She was concerned that although we have edited the sound a lot, the video editing and camera work was a bit simple. We showed her a scene we were going to put in featuring jump cuts and she liked it.
All in all, I am happy with the feedback we received as they are all small things that were either temporary or small things we could easily resolve.
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